速來學(xué)習(xí)「城市化與全球化」話題大作文，get best score！

“城市化”并非雅思寫作考試中的熱門主題，但是隨著全球問題日益凸顯、發(fā)展中國家在經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展過程中產(chǎn)生的各種問題，預(yù)計(jì)這類話題可能會(huì)成為未來命題的“寵兒”，需要多多關(guān)注。

比如“交通堵塞”就是其中的高頻考點(diǎn)，主要考查交通擁堵問題造成的原因、可能的解決辦法。

大家可以參考以下論點(diǎn)：

1、人們開私家車的原因  擁有汽車的好處之一是方便和自由。

例如，車主不受時(shí)間表和公共交通不便的束縛。在美國這樣的國家，人們常常是驅(qū)車幾百碼到當(dāng)?shù)氐碾s貨店，而不是步行。

one of the advantages contributing to owning cars is convenience and freedom. For example, the owner is not tied to timetables and the inconvenience of public transport. In countries like the USA, is is not unknown for people to drive a few hundred yards to their local grocery store rather than walk. 

此外，在一些發(fā)展中國家，人們也普遍認(rèn)為擁有汽車是個(gè)人地位的象征，如財(cái)富、權(quán)力和社會(huì)聲望。

Furthermore, it is also generally accepted in some  developing countries that car ownership is a symbol of personal status such as wealth, power and social prestige.

2、私家車的負(fù)面影響私家車最 大的二氧化碳排放源之一，也是空氣污染的主要來源。

Private cars is one of the largest sources of CO2 emissions and a major source of air pollution.

私家車燃燒石油，是全球溫室氣體排放的最 大來源之一。它也是空氣污染的重災(zāi)區(qū)。汽車是空氣污染的主要來源，產(chǎn)生大量的氮氧化物、一氧化碳和顆粒物。

Private cars burn  petroleum and is one of the largest sources of global greenhouse gas emissions. It's also heavy on air pollution. cars are a major contributor to air pollution producing significant amounts of nitrogen oxides, carbon monoxide, and particulate matter.

汽車數(shù)量的爆炸性增長導(dǎo)致道路更加擁擠。

The exploding vehicle population is contributing to more congestion on the road. 

3、交通堵塞的解決方法一個(gè)解決方案是鼓勵(lì)更多企業(yè)在農(nóng)村地區(qū)開展業(yè)務(wù)。這將在這些地方創(chuàng)造更多的就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)，從而防止農(nóng)村人口遷移到城市地區(qū)。當(dāng)人們能夠在他們居住地附近找到工作時(shí)，他們就不必長途跋涉。

One solution is to encourage more businesses to set up their operations in rural areas. This will create more jobs in those places and thus prevent the migration of rural people into urban areas. When people can find a job close to where they live, they do not have to travel long distances.  

政府還應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)各組織向其員工提供在家工作的選擇。推廣電子商務(wù)是減少人們通勤的另一種方式。

The government should also encourage organizations to offer the work-from-home option to their employees. Promoting e-commerce is another way to reduce the need for people to travel. 

在全國范圍內(nèi)增加對(duì)公共交通的投資可以減少交通擁堵，并減少國家碳足跡。

An increasing investment in public transportation across the country can reduce traffic congestion, and decrease national carbon footprint. 

我們一起來看一道題：

An increasing number of people use cars for commuting and traveling. What problems are caused by this and do you agree that people should be discouraged from using cars? 

【20200917】這道題問，私家車日益增多，這會(huì)帶來什么樣的問題，你覺得人們是不是應(yīng)該少用私家車？第 一個(gè)問題很好回答，我們可以參考【私家車的負(fù)面影響】的論點(diǎn)。第二個(gè)問題講到人們是否應(yīng)該少開車，如果你不同意，那可以去寫【人們開私家車的原因】；如果你同意，寫明你的原因即可。

詳細(xì)的論證大家可以參考《2020年寫作題目及范文》，自行索引查看。

我們再來試一道題：

The best way to deal with the problem related to the traffic and transportation is to encourage people to live in cities rather than in suburbs and countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

【20211120】題目中觀點(diǎn)提到，為了解決交通堵塞，最 好的方式是鼓勵(lì)人們住到市區(qū)。如果同意，我們可以承認(rèn)題目觀點(diǎn)的合理性，并且表面原因就可以了——人們住在城市里確實(shí)能緩解交通問題，可以參考以下原因：大多數(shù)住在郊區(qū)的人在城市里有工作。因此，每天早上他們都要從家里到城里的辦公室，造成沿途的交通擁堵。

This is because most people living in suburbs have jobs in the city. Consequently, every morning they travel all the way from their home to their office in the city causing traffic jams along the way.

要是不同意，我們可以參考【交通堵塞的解決方法】，提出更好的解決方式就行了。當(dāng)然，私家車也常常在環(huán)境類話題中考察。

之前我們在環(huán)境類中提到這道題，你可以看看是否還有印象：

As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

【20190622】題目中提到了買私家車對(duì)“個(gè)人的好處” 。簡單， 直接用上【人們開私家車的原因】，不就行了嗎？

以上我們提到的每個(gè)題目都收錄于《2019-2023年雅思真考范文集》中，想要提升雅思寫作水平非一日之功，這份由由新通專業(yè)老師編撰的范文集趕緊收藏好！