雅思寫作常見錯誤，來看看你中招了嘛~

很多寶子們在雅思寫作中錯誤頻出，為了避免再次出現(xiàn)諸多錯誤，小新將雅思寫作中常見的錯誤和改正的方法整理出來了�？旄�著小新一起來看看吧~

01句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整

結(jié)構(gòu)不完整的句子是雅思寫作中的常見錯誤。例如 Because air polluton is harmful to human heatth. 在正式文體中because 引導(dǎo)的白子，只能用作分句，不能單獨使用。
正確的句子應(yīng)該是 Because air pollution is harmful to human health, all men must have the awareness of protecting environment. 
又如：Ten boys playing football 句子中缺少謂語動詞。正確的句子應(yīng)該是：Ten boys are playing football!.

02逗號分割句子

逗號分隔句子也是寫作時較為常見的一個問題。例如：The number of cars deareased from 10 to 20 units between April and May, this increased to 5 in June.
逗號前后分別有兩個帶有主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子，這是逗號的一種誤用。改正的方法多種，一種是將逗號改為分號，即：The number of cars decreased fom 10 to 20 units betveen April and May:this increased to 5 in June. 分號的使用是很多中國學(xué)生不太熟悉的。也可以使用連詞來解決這一問題。該句可改為：The number of cars decreased from 10 to 20 units between April and May, and this increased to 5 in June.

03缺少標點符號

與逗號分割句子相反，該用標點符號的時候卻沒有使用，也是不正確的。
例如：Iin the past she worked in foreign company 這句的正確寫法應(yīng)為：In the past, she worked in foreign company.

04銜接詞邏輯錨誤

銜接詞邏輯錯誤在考生的作文中是常見的。舉個例子：Frank was a famous orator, and he was most famous for his discovery of e-bike. 這句的錯誤在于后半句應(yīng)該是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，,連接詞卻使用了 and， 應(yīng)該使用 but 才準確。

05指代模糊

請看這個例句：When Ronnie declared himself to Jack, he was aghast 這個句子的he 指代 Ronnie 還是 Jack,指名不清，正確的句子應(yīng)該是 Ronnie declared himself to Jack, who was aghast.
另例：Riding a new bike, the dog chased him a mile. 根據(jù)這個句子的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，意思應(yīng)該是“狗騎著新車追了他一英里。”顯然不合乎邏輯，應(yīng)改為 When he rode a new bike, the dog chased him a mile.

06主動語態(tài)和被動語態(tài)混用

在一個句子里，應(yīng)該避免主動語態(tài)和被動語態(tài)混用，還要保持時態(tài)一致。例如：We could hear raucous sounds from the party as the house was approached. 
正確的句子應(yīng)該是 We could hear raucous sounds from the party as we approached the house. 7 fI: We looked forward to the party and it was greatly enjoyed. We looked forward to the party and enjoyed it very much. (V)

07時態(tài)混用錯誤
由于漢語的動詞沒有時態(tài),所以中國學(xué)生對時態(tài)的學(xué)握較為薄弱，有時會無意識地出現(xiàn)這方面的錯誤。例如：went into the room, closed the door, and goes to bed. 
這個句子前兩個動詞是過去式,一個動詞用了現(xiàn)在時，顯然是時態(tài)不統(tǒng)一的。正確的句子應(yīng)該是 He went into the room, cosed the door, and went to bed.

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